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Murder
Walls for Crime Novelists
©2005
Cheryl Kaye Tardif
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A Murder Wall is a vital tool for crime novelists. Imagine trying to
write a story without knowing your suspects or their possible motives. For
any great crime novelist, your job is to treat your novel like a police
investigation, following the clues and the evidence until it reaches the
outcome or climactic resolution. If you watch most great crime dramas such
as Law & Order and Without a Trace, you will notice that investigators often use
visuals on a wall to keep each case organized. This is a Murder Wall.
Developing
a fictional crime and its cast of characters can be confusing and
overwhelming without a tool to keep everything organized. A Murder
Wall shows the structure of the crime and the characters who are
involved. On a wall close to your computer for easy access, tape up
letter-sized pieces of paper featuring photos and key points on each
character linked to a murder or crime. This technique enables the writer
to visualize the cast of characters more fully, to give each suspect or
victim a face and to bring them to life. It ensures that the basic facts of each character’s
existence are easily accessible. And it keeps you consistent with the
facts of the crime and the evidence presented.
Creating the Murder
Wall:
A Murder Wall consists of four main elements: the victim (s),
suspects, witnesses and the killer (s). You will want to include important
facts, clues and info on each victim, suspect and witness. On the
killer’s paper, I often find it helpful to have a picture of a
silhouette, rather than the killer’s appearance. It helps me to create
the ‘mystery of not knowing’. Then once I’ve reached the last few
chapters, I may change this. This also acts as a ‘non-spoiler’ in case
someone walks into your office and sees your Murder
Wall.
Victims:
 | Basic info (name, age, occupation,
marital status and physical description) |
 | How did they die? |
 | Time of death? |
 | What motive would someone have for
killing them? |
 | What were they doing prior to death? |
 | How are they connected to your
suspects or other characters in your novel? |
Suspects:
 | Basic info (name, age, occupation,
marital status and physical description) |
 | How are they connected to the
victims? |
 | What are their alibis? |
 | Do they have a motive? |
 | What clues can you leave to lead or
mislead your readers? |
Witnesses:
 | Basic info (name, age, occupation,
and physical description) |
 | What did they see or hear? |
 | How are they connected to your
suspects and to the victim? |
 | What are their alibis? |
 | Do they have a motive? |
 | Will a witness become a suspect? |
Killer
(s):
 | Basic info (name, age, occupation,
and physical description) |
 | Motive |
 | History and relationship to victim
(s) |
 | Preferred method of killing |
 | Alibi |
On the Murder Wall, keep the victim’s paper in the center. Add the
suspects around the victim, and add the witnesses along one side. Link a
strip of paper from one paper to another if two characters had a past
connection. For example, one suspect may know another suspect because he
delivered her pizza the night before. The killer’s paper can be off to
one side and strips of paper may link him to one of the witnesses or
suspects. Be sure to make notes on the strips connecting them.
Find
photos of actors whom you think physically resemble your suspects and
victims, and add a small photo to each paper. Most often writers already
have a clear picture in their head as to what the character looks like. If
you can draw, then go ahead and create your character. If not, then go
online and search the celebrity sites. Pretend you are a casting agent.
Whom would you cast in the role of the serial arsonist in your crime novel
or the evil doctor in your murder mystery? One of the easiest ways to find
your actor is to simply watch television. If you are looking for a face to
play your slasher, then check
out some of the detective shows. Find the face that inspires you, that
makes you believe “Yes, he is
Hans
VanBuren
, a demented, psychopathic killer!”
During
your novel’s progression, there will be many tidbits of information that
you can add to each Murder Wall
paper―secrets from their past, important clues and more. The key to
writing a good mystery is to mislead the reader and drop clues in the
guise of foreshadowing. Twists and turns are important elements of a good
crime novel or mystery. And don’t forget to list any bad habits your
character might have. If she is a compulsive liar, make a note. If he’s
a shifty-eyed procrastinator, the note on his paper will act as a reminder
and keep you consistent. As each character develops, continue to add any
new information to each sheet. Plots change and characters mutate. They
grow, they learn things, and they react.
Not only
will a Murder Wall help to keep
your suspects, victims and witnesses organized and in your face, you will
start to really see them. And
once an author can see her characters, there is a better chance that the
reader will visualize them also. Choosing an actor to represent these
characters will give them a voice, a stance, a personality, and life.
No novel can survive without characters with depth, heart, soul and
spirit. And a crime novel cannot survive without a strong motive!
A Murder Wall is an invaluable tool that will show you the victims,
suspects and evidence in a clear, visible way. It will help you to plot a
more believable crime, to create multi-dimensional characters, and to keep
the crime, suspects and motives on track. It is much easier to plot or
solve a crime when everything is laid out before you. Even criminals have
a plan. Why shouldn’t the crime novelist? And your plan should start
with creating a Murder Wall.
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Cheryl
Kaye Tardif, a Canadian mystery author, is the author
of three published novels: Whale Song, an emotional mystery for all
ages, Divine Intervention, a scorching psychic suspense; and her
newest release, The River, a terrifying techno-thriller. Tardif
has also worked as a journalist, script writer and motivational speaker,
and her
poetry has been published in Canada and the US. |
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